Open Poetry #34 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
the sayer told me about stone and how you would be a pillar with your back to my window I believed her early she knew of the winds of 72 and the black dog with gold eyes you spoke of the dragon once how it died in the cove of lonely but it was just a tattoo as was the ring on your mind and your high heels too when we went to the johnboat and listened to the cypress hounds make splinters in the bayou the man at the gallery says I shouldn't touch the statyou that way in public or at all so I nod and grin my way to mahya's for another hand rolled habana and her dark skin bosom smile when she calls me mens van steen and brings her fire to my habit ______________ Dark....scribble note...mayha's is a little joint in St Thomas, good rum and hand rolled habanas...she (mahya) is very dark (like the cigars), very dutch, with emerald green eyes... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is touching a very lovely place...it is beautiful even if you can't touch the statyou. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Interesting write enjoyed the read. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
wow...is this rich in scent and texture... so much enjoyed.... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I can so relate... Morning handsome wishing you a great day sending you tons of assention smiles to walk with you in this day of Thursday |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your scribble notes helped me to better appreciate and understand your intriguing poem. To read of such beautifully described transgressions, brings smiles... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nice. I enjoyed a place called "The Greenhouse" in St. Thomas (I believe it was spelled different). I spent most my time there serving officers wine and cheese... oh what a life. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah Dark - Mayha's sounds exotic and the ambiance of this poem intoxicating - I love places that give that feel - Like Ruby Red's in New Orleans - an atmosphere I shall never forget - Love this - Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS I think I'd like to go there....on some sea to some other eternity. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Loved where you took me with this Mr D as always Mxx and I am haunted |
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