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b.costen
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since 2003-11-02

Posts 107
ontario, CAN

0 posted 2005-02-03 11:29 AM

thoughts don’t need a focus
that’s why books blur

people are something else too
(moment of 0 confidence)

as the world gets scarier
so must our mirrors

feruled thighs are purpling
in the bruise of 1:12am regret

a boy simulates rape
in the vestiges of a saint’s old pew

and i reflect fear

as an ocean floor projects waves

as a cloud neglects the morning light

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

1 posted 2005-02-03 12:37 PM

stark and poignant
hits hard

b.costen
Member

since 2003-11-02

Posts 107
ontario, CAN

2 posted 2005-02-03 12:46 PM

thanks god-S

so what's it going to be then, eh?

Alicia
Member

since 2002-03-22

Posts 279

3 posted 2005-02-03 01:00 PM

wow. will be watching for your posts.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-02-03 01:34 PM

I like this...powerful words

write more!

b.costen
Member

since 2003-11-02

Posts 107
ontario, CAN

5 posted 2005-02-03 01:47 PM

thanks guys... if interested in more see:
http://www.voicesofunreason.com/poetry/bowels91poems

has all previous work (90 or so edited) up till now

enjoy if you like

Red Dreams
Member

since 2005-01-09

Posts 90
massachusetts

6 posted 2005-02-03 07:07 PM

can i join your fan club?

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-02-03 07:35 PM

Enjoyed this.

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2005-02-03 09:57 PM

count me in, looking at your archives, sorry i hadn't read you sooner

b.costen
Member

since 2003-11-02

Posts 107
ontario, CAN

9 posted 2005-02-03 10:34 PM

"can i join your fan club?" ... lol

iduno man, admission's pretty damn high

thanks, it feels good to know people are reading... and if its my stuff then hey even better

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

10 posted 2005-02-04 12:56 PM

Fear is a shape-changer that comes in many forms, you know...and I've seen many of those. It can be as obvious as a scream, or as camoflaged as a wall of bluster...but once you recognize one of its shapes, it never fools you again.

~~J

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

11 posted 2005-02-04 11:35 AM

very nice poem

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

12 posted 2005-02-04 01:42 PM

you are a language poetry fan(aren't you?), my favorite poetry style

b.costen
Member

since 2003-11-02

Posts 107
ontario, CAN

13 posted 2005-02-04 03:02 PM

i'm a slight fan, i do realize it is a great style; but i try not to go too overboard with the whole thing--i know some authors who have

thanks pandonov and all for your interesting replies

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