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Holding back the storm (((( for Karen ))))
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Holding back the storm (((( for Karen )))) |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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Between sky and heaven your tide clings to me and holds back the storm: and the blue fish that are your eyes, weep for what I know the rise of you and the curling of your waves that come and go inside of me perhaps? one day, in the pull of you, goddess? you will roll back the salt and take your breath that blew my hair just so. Perhaps another summer will arrive full of shells, full of wild upon your shore with the currents of your breath storming me. You are lovely, and I love you and I am the albatross that fly's far from the land and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you ~Buckingham/Nicks |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
frowning first at "albatross" (yer begging for that spanking) and my beloved ladymine, only you could make me yearn for beaches. You...know that I love you my cherished friend and sister.  You've made a soup out of me.   thank you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
gawd you two are so beautiful, and this is so beautiful.... geez now I'm wanting to cry. Lovely write Maree.... just lovely |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
you will roll back the salt and take your breath that blew my hair just so. ~*~ Take bones, bywaywater and one bayleaf... and you have soup... and more. Brava, little one! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
absolutely stunning....but I've come to expect nothing less from you  ...me senses all is very well with you dear friend |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree There is no holding back in this poem! Emotive wave, so well written!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
ya, you fly out of the ordinary ,too |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Karen? why ya frowning at "albatross"? "(yer begging for that spanking)"  always!and yes m'lady i know "You've made a soup out of me." hehe not tater soup? luv you gorgeous. GS, thank you for the beautiful and the lovely *smile* Thank you Sunshinygirl, love ya. Hey Ruth! Nice to see you here, thank you for popping in to read and your lovely comment..and yes all is well. Hope all is well with you too. Martie, thank you my dear friend *hugs* & *kisses* Dixie, thanks for the wow *smile* Pandonov "you fly out of the ordinary ,too" always my friend, thank you. Mxx and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful words from a beautiful soul missing ya too bella |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Essence. Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lol at that soup stuff dang, Angel, this is a thender sisterlove write! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sexy and playful very nice |
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