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0 posted 2005-02-02 12:21 PM



Autumn leaves still cling

To flower-laden branches...

The days of magic

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1 posted 2005-02-02 12:37 PM


very nice, yes
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2 posted 2005-02-02 02:01 AM




How about  ,  instead of  ...

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3 posted 2005-02-02 07:03 AM


funny how one season  clings to another~~

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4 posted 2005-02-02 08:45 AM


Ed
Gentle smiles at the beauty of this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*`

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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5 posted 2005-02-02 09:55 AM



Leave the ellipses...
they're holding on tightly
to that thought

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6 posted 2005-02-02 09:57 AM


Makes me long for spring amidst this harsh winter....~P
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7 posted 2005-02-02 10:01 AM


ohhh but of course...days of magic when all was rare...and wonderful...
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8 posted 2005-02-02 10:46 AM


Hi Catkin! Yes...I'm a fool for ellipses...as you know....

Prolly not a good thing overall, but I like 'em!

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9 posted 2005-02-02 11:03 AM


Ed

There is always magic, in any day.....some more than others!  The trick is seeing it, which you seem to do well!  

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10 posted 2005-02-02 11:33 AM


There's something about those special days here, when the two seasons cross...autumn and spring becoming one for a moment....it happys me to see that.

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11 posted 2005-02-02 11:56 AM


You gave me two smiles here... *S* First, with your lovely haiku... you words present such a clear image! *S*

And second... the happys in your response... I wish you more of them! *S*

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