Open Poetry #34 |
Days Of Magic . . . .haiku |
Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Autumn leaves still cling To flower-laden branches... The days of magic |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice, yes |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
How about , instead of ... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
funny how one season clings to another~~ M |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ed Gentle smiles at the beauty of this~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*` ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
Leave the ellipses... they're holding on tightly to that thought |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Makes me long for spring amidst this harsh winter....~P |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
ohhh but of course...days of magic when all was rare...and wonderful... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Hi Catkin! Yes...I'm a fool for ellipses...as you know.... Prolly not a good thing overall, but I like 'em! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ed There is always magic, in any day.....some more than others! The trick is seeing it, which you seem to do well! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
There's something about those special days here, when the two seasons cross...autumn and spring becoming one for a moment....it happys me to see that. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You gave me two smiles here... *S* First, with your lovely haiku... you words present such a clear image! *S* And second... the happys in your response... I wish you more of them! *S* |
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