Open Poetry #34 |
fractured prisms |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
peeking through fractured prisms of reality mere reflections of distilled thoughts crystallized from truths filtered through murky turbidity sipped from deeply dredged wells that held only remnants of human misery wallowing in cups yet to be emptied bitter taste of a hideous uncoveted darkness, tainted by streaming sunlight’s bold glare and you...standing there smugly sunglasses in hand, rejecting my struggling brilliance, dimming me into burnt ashes burned by a heart that spits fire on love’s hearth leaving behind chilled frost bitten hands seeking to hold buds of life dormant, I waited for more fertile soils |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I don't see you dimmed for long...Or dimmed very much. Nice write! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hey, handsome genius |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
smiling here...and waiting to watch you bloom Underneath thick winter snow Hope springs eternal I am nothing special...and my name will soon be forgotten,but I've loved another with all my heart and soul,and to me,this has always been enough.~N.S |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and when the buds bloom...beauty begins.. loved this one Kacy The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh wow Kacy...this is wonderful! I so much enjoy this style with you. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
waiting sometime, can be the most enlightening Tremendous visuals here! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun You know under the ice there is a very rich soil. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Such a strong assemblage of images, Kacy, any one of them would do in my solar plexus. It is always good to read your thoughts. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I relate well good write |
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mysticpoe Senior Member
since 2003-02-28
Posts 883 |
Sounds like one is moving on Midnite. Nice descriptions with a nice nonchalant feeling - becoming conscious and secure of what really is. Nice pen here. wayne If nothing is something |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely written ma'am.. |
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