True Love of A Fair Maidens Heart

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2005-01-31 11:20 PM

My love, for thee I await,
At the castle gates,

For thee to rescue my lonely heart,
From this sorrow, This pain that my heart beholds,

This cage has bound thy soul to death,
It has wounded thy heart deeply,

My prince, my knight,
Oh, how my soul weeps for thee,

I hunger, I thirst for thee,
Come rescue me from this darkness of doom,

Break thy chains to set thee free,
For love I hold within me,
Tis not love,

Love of will, of control,
Tis not love that binds me here,

I am no fools love,
For love does not command,
Love is not love which demands, deceives,
or destroys,

Love hath thou brought to thee,
Unto thy heart,

Behold this love,
This key to thy heart,

Rescue me thy sweet prince,
Set thy fair maidens' heart free,

This fortress holds me no more,
No castle walls, nor gates that bind,
Nor guards to capture me,

Tonight, my sweet love, My dear prince,
I will await for thee,

Through death, though pain,
Our love is destiny,

For the world shall crumble, The trees shall fall,
The earth covered by the sea,

I will endure all, a thousand times,
Just to hold you once,

For the smell of your flesh,
The taste of your lips,

To hear your heartbeat against mine,
To stare deep into your eyes of mystery,
All for gain , nothing at loss,

You have captured the love of this fair maidens heart,

It is with passion, with love,
That I call out to thee,

Come my sweet prince to rescue me,
For time is of the essence,
death shall come to thy heart,

If love does not embrace it,
My soul will be torn apart,

This, my love,
Is the love of your true maidens' heart.

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2005-02-01 12:03 PM

One of your finest Romantic...Triple A+++...James

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2005-02-01 12:16 PM

Thank you soooo much James!!!!!!! here is a big

and a

You have made my day!

Love and Hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

3 posted 2005-02-01 12:31 PM

Yep, another passionate romantic plea. He cannot ignore this one, can he?

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2005-02-01 12:34 PM

I hope not Ms...Moon...Thanks for your sweet and kind reply!

Love ya!

~ARh

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-02-01 12:59 PM

Ahh! Another great pic of the fair maiden! It is always a pleasant surprise when I see a new photo!

A plaintif cry for a love that's true...
Eloquently expressed!

EA

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-02-01 01:40 AM

Thank you miss Angel...

Your angel words are heavenly...

Love and hugs ~ARH

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

7 posted 2005-02-01 03:05 AM

ARH, I hope that Prince of yours hears your heart, for it is a lovely one, as is this poem.

....jo

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2005-02-01 06:31 AM

Now who could not be swayed by such a passionate plea from the heart? Surely this would fan the fires of love of any man. Well done ARH.

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

9 posted 2005-02-01 04:29 PM

The purest of fantasy at it's best. I love the use of the Old English (the thee, thy, and thou's, etc. etc.) when writing of Princesses, Knights, Love and Lore. I guess I'm sentimental that way, but it does inspire Love and Chivalry for me to just think about the Once Upon a Time. Beautiful writing. -Bob

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2005-02-01 08:07 PM

I too enjoy the period feel - can see the fair maiden issuing her plea -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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