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Open Poetry #34

Under A Mad Moon

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2005-01-31 08:19 PM

this is a dream

this is a dream

wholly irrational
from any imaginable
point of view

this is a dream

I have no idea
what I’m doing here
a crowd in waves
moving across the room

a woman for whom I do not care
her hair in a bun like Emily
reading to me lines of poetry
this business shirt yellowed
and full of holes

this is a dream
only a dream
that’s soon to end

then you in my arms
asking forgiveness for being there

I in confusion
saying three words
in your ear

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2005-02-01 04:20 PM

The words are searching, sensitive, feeling, observant.

I can feel with the poem.

Dave

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-02-02 12:21 PM

Like this...James

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