Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-10-27
09:17 PM
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Darkness comes In the hushed silence of night Veiled in his cloak of shadows Swirling about as mists Of dew drop passion shimmering Hiding his face But not his words Which brush as if fingers Tracing the language of sin Across exposed flesh Writing shiver trails Over hardened ends And through soft valleys Leaving remains of damp upon lips Mouthing the naughty But tasting of the divine Merging into rivers Seeping through vestiges Of wine blend moments Of carnal caramel And the dark Chocolate Of consummation
s.a.t.
Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
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2004-10-27
09:57 PM
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Well my dear, if this is in any way a response to Wranx' challenge, I know certainly whose mask you hide behind...
and you did a magnificent job!
And that is a wonderful photo!
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Midnitesun
Member Empyrean
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647
Gaia
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2004-10-27
11:33 PM
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oooh lala, Susan, this is a tasty tribute write to the Dark's fine pen
*cool photo, lady*
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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
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2004-10-28
12:06 PM
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excellent write
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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada
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2004-10-28
12:27 PM
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this was so amazing,it just left me speachless. thank you for writting this work of art.
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-10-28
12:33 PM
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Ah, thank you - it is Strange - wearing this cloak of Darkness - yet so very delightful
Hugs all -
Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
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2004-10-28
01:33 AM
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Enjoyed...James
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babygirlwlove
Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
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posted
2004-10-28
07:15 AM
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oh yeah...gotta love that hot, Dark chocolate before bed...lol
this is lovely...
**babygirL****Intoxicant to the SouL**
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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
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2004-10-28
07:44 AM
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vous ĂȘtes savoring sensual ms susan btw..I got a five gallon bucket of melted M&Ms..wanna party? enjoyed this much and the photo,mmmmm got a sister?
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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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2004-10-28
08:45 AM
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what a beautiful photograph of you...and the likeness shines through your words...light, refreshing, a lady poetess with much to give...
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Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
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2004-10-28
08:59 AM
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Susan Now that's my kind of writing. Well done.
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
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2004-10-28
09:07 AM
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Oooh wonderful write Susan! And, love the new pic! Hugs~~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~
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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
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2004-10-28
09:14 AM
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Mona Lisa lives on! Love your new photo!
After reading your poem, I find myself craving sweets ~ both literally and figuratively!
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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
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2004-10-28
09:17 AM
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Dark is nice sometimes
I like the new picture of you
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-10-28
10:12 AM
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Most appreciated - but this morning it seems to be the old me up there? Hmmmmm-
This was a fun write and muse inspired - thank you for your kind replies and the gift of friendship -
Hugs all - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348
Florida
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2004-10-28
10:33 AM
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I love chocolate...and other candy as well..
yet another fine writing."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" ~Sarah McLachlan~
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-10-28
02:40 PM
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Thank you Susan - Chocolate passion must run with the name
SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
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2004-10-30
10:20 AM
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Wow! Glad I came across this juicy write ...
SPECIAL!
You are beautiful ... on all levels!
Love and hugs. Margherita
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Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
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2004-10-30
11:16 AM
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Margherita - you are beyond sweet - thank you so much dear -
SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.
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