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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-31 07:17 AM

There are those moments
when the tender is felt
such a fine line in appearance
but deep grooves in reality.

Truth harder to say
easier to show, a penalty
in challenge to connect...
banishment on the edge
of missing you.

Upgrading my mind
trading fear of
to lift me to a plane of you
in those final moments that
repeated and repeated
and repeated because
time ends too soon.

Crowded inside, thoughts
squeeze those tears
needing out, uniting
as they cascade,
coming to a trickle only after.

The whys don't matter
as much as the when and where.
A journey ...
to be continued...

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

1 posted 2005-01-31 07:41 AM

A poem of gentleness, take the journey, free your heart, thank you...

Goldenrose.

Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper).

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

2 posted 2005-01-31 09:25 AM

MzWynter~

'deep grooves in reality'

'The whys don't matter
as much as the when and where.'

Knowing the tender feel of these thoughts~

Good morning gal ... wishing you were visiting here in Florida~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-31 11:39 AM

this touches me

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2005-01-31 11:42 AM

I could not high light a favorite line, and I tried, but each one was better then the last...truly wonderful writing

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2005-01-31 11:47 AM

May your journey continue in a harmonious and joyful fashion. A soul as beautiful as yours, deserves to be happy.

EA

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2005-01-31 07:20 PM

I am with Dixie on this one...it touched something in me.

Missing is such a hard emotion with so many degrees and angles and colors. But I suppose for me, I am glad for missing because it means that at one time, it was.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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