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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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There are those moments when the tender is felt such a fine line in appearance but deep grooves in reality. Truth harder to say easier to show, a penalty in challenge to connect... banishment on the edge of missing you. Upgrading my mind trading fear of to lift me to a plane of you in those final moments that repeated and repeated and repeated because time ends too soon. Crowded inside, thoughts squeeze those tears needing out, uniting as they cascade, coming to a trickle only after. The whys don't matter as much as the when and where. A journey ... to be continued... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A poem of gentleness, take the journey, free your heart, thank you... Goldenrose. Last night i dreamed i ate a ten pound marsh mallow, when i woke up the pillow was gone (Tommy Cooper). |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MzWynter~ 'deep grooves in reality' 'The whys don't matter as much as the when and where.' Knowing the tender feel of these thoughts~  Good morning gal ... wishing you were visiting here in Florida~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this touches me  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I could not high light a favorite line, and I tried, but each one was better then the last...truly wonderful writing |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your journey continue in a harmonious and joyful fashion. A soul as beautiful as yours, deserves to be happy. EA |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I am with Dixie on this one...it touched something in me. Missing is such a hard emotion with so many degrees and angles and colors. But I suppose for me, I am glad for missing because it means that at one time, it was. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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