Open Poetry #34 |
Soul Cages |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
you strut that voice soul sounds slipping cross dancing drawl wrappin' 'round jazz sounds makin' bones tumble to toe tappin' rhythm you're sin in a song honey glazed over the Sting of you s.a.t. Listening to one of my favorite artists - Sting, and thought I'd write a little something Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
got my toes tappin' love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thnx babygirL - music moves the soul - Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"I have a wager" the brave child spoke, The fisherman laughed, though disturbed at the joke, "You will drink what I drink but you must equal me, And if the drink leaves me standing, A soul shall go free." Hm, thanks Susan...it's been awhile since I thought about these words.... K |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
My toe is tapping, too. This one pulled me into it. I like Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
cross dancing drawl wrappin' 'round jazz sounds makin' bones tumble to toe tappin' rhythm you're sin in a song honey glazed over the Sting of you Wow...what a write! Just sitting here shaking my head in awe...speechless What terrific writers in this page... Thank you for sharing |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
hey does he wrestle in the WWE? (cool stuff babe) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good stuff! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
My daughter recently attended a Sting concert in Toronto. She would really appreciate your poem! I'll show it to her. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you all most kindly for the smile of your replies this morning - Hugs - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
you're sin in a song honey glazed ~*~ Excellent! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you Decaflame - listening to Sting makes me think things unbecoming of a lady Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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