Open Poetry #34 |
Reality Waits |
Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
The world shifts beneath our caress... As if reality has gathered to the fingers. And waits only for the moment of our touch. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh... THAT was the earthquake I felt... |
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Alicia Member
since 2002-03-22
Posts 279 |
oh, fabulous! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
...Exquisite!.... ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmm, mmmm, mmmm - yes siree - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
dang, you done didit again |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Wow, you certainly accomplished an array of feelings with these words. Amazing. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Tremendous! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
short and powerful...always admired that about you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your poem gives a whole new meaning ~ and feel! ~ to the saying, "Reach out and touch somebody." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
The world shifts beneath our caress... As if reality has gathered to the fingers. And waits only for the moment of our touch. Meteorites of love flash through space crashing against our bodies casting our souls into each other changing forever our horizons Another sparkling gem! I love you. Margherita |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Eric Hope you dont mind Dave The world shifts beneath our caress... Sounds penetrate gently Like a life In a room To one side To take As if reality has gathered to the fingers. And waits only for the moment of our touch. |
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