Gossamer Be the Threads Thou Weaves With Speech

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EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

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0 posted 2005-01-28 11:13 PM

Gossamer Be the Threads Thou Weaves With Speech

Gossamer be the threads thou weaves with speech,
Come-hither prose betroths mine eyes to thee,
The tapestry hath loosened through the breach,
Need and yea want to a lesser degree.

In this, ephemeral, moment of a awe,
When hued be the images thou has spun,
My sense of distinctiveness doth withdraw,
The beat of our hearts straightaway is one.

Sculpt for me images torn from your soul,
Gift me honeyed words sweetened with your love,
Wed me to the verses you would extol,
Though I’m but a rogue and unworthy of,

This laurel thou gives' without reserve dear,
Thou art my, "everything," upon this sphere.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

SEA

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with you

1 posted 2005-01-29 12:19 PM

"The beat of our hearts straightaway is one.

Sculpt for me images torn from your soul,
Gift me honeyed words sweetened with your love,
Wed me to the verses you would extol,
Though I’m but a rogue and unworthy of,

This laurel thou gives' without reserve dear,
Thou art my, "everything," upon this sphere."

wow, this is really beautiful...

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

2 posted 2005-01-29 05:55 AM

Some extraordinary lines here, EV2! It's good to read your poetry again. It's very pretty.

sadie

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

3 posted 2005-01-29 09:26 AM

Trading a smile for a smile EV2...
I read your writes often...both romantic and heartfelt. A gift I cannot always put into words myself.
TD

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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The World of Poetry

4 posted 2005-01-29 10:16 AM

Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-29 11:30 AM

You weave so lovely your threads of the sweet - I do so love to read your thoughts spun of honey -

Wonderful, this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

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Forever In Your Heart

6 posted 2005-01-29 01:20 PM

I can always come here and get my sugar rush for the day~Like honey to my lips.....

Sweet~

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2005-01-29 02:51 PM

Mmmm this is sweet.
You have melted my heart again.
Love this.

;-)

Amour Vous

Within this heart you'll find love

Snow

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Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

8 posted 2005-01-29 04:20 PM

"Sculpt for me images torn from your soul,"

how wonderful it would be for someone to be able to not only welcome such images, but, for the other to trust enough to do so....using the word "torn" gives me the feeling that it would be a moment unlike one ever known. to tear from ones self is the ulitmate sacrifice ... the "here is my heart ... please handle it with care" statement that can go unsaid but heard so loudly.... and so .. i ramble.

damn, this was a lot more thought provoking than i first felt while reading.

i enjoyed this, kevin. very much.

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