Open Poetry #34 |
Continuum |
Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
If in the soft last light of dusk you pause beside the long road,... beneath the faint just apparent stars, and somehow, for it all, being moved you cannot move, remember us who once, as you,... in times beyond the now you see, becoming light felt our hearts with equal awe absorb the sacred hour. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Excellent. Dave |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, John! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I try to learn from every poet whose work I read....with you it's easy, a pleasure. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Love this! ~Alli~ *AIM = Alli4000* Journal! |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
ah, so beautiful but never know what you are talking about. I may just read twice next time. |
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