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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-28 08:06 AM



you were painting sculptures
when I came over
wanting to touch your tools
with my craftsman thoughts
of building music
in muffie's tree house

you said I had to wait
or I would get you on me
and ruin my white shirt
so I took it off
and stood in the shower
without an umbrella

I played in your paint bucket
when you weren't looking
and knocked it over
accidently on purpose
you pouted at my laughing
then laughed when you smeared me

and wrote i love you on my whispers


_____________
dark


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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

1 posted 2005-01-28 08:19 AM


I played in your paint bucket
when you weren't looking
and knocked it over
accidently on purpose
you pouted at my laughing
then laughed when you smeared me

and wrote i love you on my whispers


very artistic lovin ya got going on here
this mornin DS.  What a lucky lady she is to wear your smiles.

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2005-01-28 08:20 AM



AHA...being playful today!

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2005-01-28 08:28 AM


sounds like winter violin music movie, one which would go way over budget in Tinsel Town
smiles and hugs...good one

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
4 posted 2005-01-28 08:43 AM


DS

Sweet and colorful lovely!  

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-01-28 10:12 AM


The canvas waits to be painted pretty by love touch colors - in a collaboration of creation - - lovin' the picture this paints D -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Indigo
Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

6 posted 2005-01-28 04:39 PM


This old house
made new
with tender touch
and drill bit dreams

hand polished
with whispers
and anticipation
of trading spaces.

D, I always thought you'd make a great handyman. ;-)

Indigo

Corinne
Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167
state of confusion
7 posted 2005-01-28 07:55 PM


With a title like that, who could resist?

lovely, sensuous scene well painted.


Corinne

Beki
Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569
Newport Beach, CA, USA
8 posted 2005-01-29 05:07 PM


I REALLY LIKE THIS ONE -- DELIGHTFULLY PLAYFUL -- FUN FUN FUN
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
9 posted 2005-01-30 07:18 PM


Back again - reading in pink blush pleasure- love what you do with a canvas, D

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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