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trails of tears |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
From the corner of my eye I see a great face where many moons gone by scars left their trace I see the trails left by fallen tears from what they came and took from this great land here my heart is filled with much sorrow pain from past lost mans greed take our needs tossed Long gray hair red band and feather Spirits rising over stormy weather  |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Well done~ a soul filled, spirit filled poem, I agree with all that you have said...and you have stated it so powerfully! ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
well done great read does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
God Bless you! What a wonderful write. JL  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou both~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
JL~ thanks and bless you too |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I just watch the statues cry and listen to them speak to the eagles enjoyed this ms |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marcia~ You know this one touches me tenderly~ So heartfelt ... thank you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
and still their cries echoe.... very well done Marsha, thank you for this. |
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