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Ratleader

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

0 posted 2005-01-27 07:58 PM

Ancient black pear trees

tethering clouds of blossoms

white dew until dusk

Martie

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California

1 posted 2005-01-27 08:02 PM

Ed

This is just like they are....beautiful!!!

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

2 posted 2005-01-27 08:46 PM

vivid image....lovely

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My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2005-01-27 08:49 PM

Ed~
Emitting a soft ahhhh~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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suthern

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since 1999-07-29

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Louisiana

4 posted 2005-01-28 09:27 AM

I know I've said this before... but it bears repeating. *S* No one writes these better... This is so lovely!!!

GG
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since 2002-12-03

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Lost in thought

5 posted 2005-01-28 12:45 PM

I love these...

Keep writing them.
stop reading this.
Go. Write!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Ratleader

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6 posted 2005-01-28 12:52 PM

Your wish shall be my command, dear lady.....I will go write one for you as soon as the clock lets me....probably an hour and a half from now....

Glad I peeked in here -- I needed an assignment I wouldn't hate!

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jellybeans
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7 posted 2005-01-28 02:36 PM

well I don't know 'black pear trees' but this makes me wish I did

vandana

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USA

8 posted 2005-01-29 01:23 PM

good read

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

9 posted 2005-01-29 07:48 PM

Nice job!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

passing shadows
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displaced

10 posted 2005-01-29 08:13 PM

how well you do these!

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

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A Mountain Paradise

11 posted 2005-01-29 08:16 PM

Great haiku!

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

INclan
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since 1999-07-20

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Indiana, USA

12 posted 2005-01-30 03:44 PM

Aaaahhhhhh....and they smell nice too.

Well done.

INclan

Susan
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walking the surreal

13 posted 2005-01-30 06:57 PM

Mmm - what a pretty vision -

Susan

Midnitesun

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Gaia

14 posted 2005-01-30 08:49 PM

nice visuals here

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