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0 posted 2005-01-27 07:58 PM



Ancient black pear trees

tethering clouds of blossoms

white dew until dusk

© Copyright 2005 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-27 08:02 PM


Ed

This is just like they are....beautiful!!!  

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2 posted 2005-01-27 08:46 PM


vivid image....lovely

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My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
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3 posted 2005-01-27 08:49 PM


Ed~
Emitting a soft ahhhh~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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4 posted 2005-01-28 09:27 AM


I know I've said this before... but it bears repeating. *S* No one writes these better... This is so lovely!!!
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5 posted 2005-01-28 12:45 PM


I love these...

Keep writing them.
stop reading this.
Go. Write!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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6 posted 2005-01-28 12:52 PM


Your wish shall be my command, dear lady.....I will go write one for you as soon as the clock lets me....probably an hour and a half from now....

Glad I peeked in here -- I needed an assignment I wouldn't hate!

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7 posted 2005-01-28 02:36 PM


well I don't know 'black pear trees' but this makes me wish I did
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8 posted 2005-01-29 01:23 PM


good read
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9 posted 2005-01-29 07:48 PM


Nice job!

~Alli~

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10 posted 2005-01-29 08:13 PM


how well you do these!
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11 posted 2005-01-29 08:16 PM


Great haiku!

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

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12 posted 2005-01-30 03:44 PM


Aaaahhhhhh....and they smell nice too.

Well done.

INclan

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13 posted 2005-01-30 06:57 PM


Mmm - what a pretty vision -

Susan

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14 posted 2005-01-30 08:49 PM


nice visuals here

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