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JL
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0 posted 2005-01-27 07:07 PM


Evening Lamp

Harvesting touch,
from mind to hand.
Fostering fingertips
to relay their tap and pressing.
Soothing harmony, two beings
un-divide.
Pleasure,
a moment of senses,
shared within human map.
Iridescent glistening,
tingling on shivering lips
Spirit revived in report
as mind and body attain
its warm assurance
made with loveā€¦



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-27 07:11 PM


Now, this....

deserves a candle...

for it is all I have to offer.


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2005-01-27 11:46 PM


Enjoyed...James
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2005-01-27 11:50 PM


Perfection!!!!!!!!!!!

Perfect poem, pefect presentation!

I see the lamp, I feel your passion jumping off the pages into my room~

Lights up my room~
Loved it~~~~~~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Enotneicna
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4 posted 2005-01-28 01:43 AM


A wonderful lamp you light.

always,
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno



MGROVES
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5 posted 2005-01-28 03:39 AM


this is beautiful~


LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-01-28 06:43 AM


people who sit in darkness see great things through you....amazingly beautiful...and yes, indeed...perfection!


HopeS
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7 posted 2005-01-28 10:24 AM


Warm assurence , this gave a cosy feeling of togetherness

Hope

Susan
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8 posted 2005-01-28 10:43 AM


love the soft warm glow of this - it wraps one in velvet smooth pleasure

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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9 posted 2005-01-28 10:53 AM


ah...very nice
Gentle Spirit
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10 posted 2005-01-28 12:04 PM


a beautiful light of love.  well done JL.
Martie
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11 posted 2005-01-28 12:07 PM


Beautiful!!
ThisDiamond
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12 posted 2005-01-29 09:04 AM


JL...
I read this several times before I could even respond.
How eloquent you have written this beautiful work.
TD

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13 posted 2005-01-29 10:25 AM


Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

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DavePage
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14 posted 2005-01-29 01:18 PM


Like the subtle.

Dave

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