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JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-01-27 07:07 PM

Evening Lamp

Harvesting touch,
from mind to hand.
Fostering fingertips
to relay their tap and pressing.
Soothing harmony, two beings
un-divide.
Pleasure,
a moment of senses,
shared within human map.
Iridescent glistening,
tingling on shivering lips
Spirit revived in report
as mind and body attain
its warm assurance
made with love…

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-27 07:11 PM

Now, this....

deserves a candle...

for it is all I have to offer.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2005-01-27 11:46 PM

Enjoyed...James

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2005-01-27 11:50 PM

Perfection!!!!!!!!!!!

Perfect poem, pefect presentation!

I see the lamp, I feel your passion jumping off the pages into my room~

Lights up my room~
Loved it~~~~~~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Enotneicna
Member

since 1999-06-06

Posts 340
Oakland, Or, USA

4 posted 2005-01-28 01:43 AM

A wonderful lamp you light.

always,
Eno

Words are my medicine.
Read and live and love and heal!

molti benedizione (many blessings)
always
Eno

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2005-01-28 03:39 AM

this is beautiful~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2005-01-28 06:43 AM

people who sit in darkness see great things through you....amazingly beautiful...and yes, indeed...perfection!

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

7 posted 2005-01-28 10:24 AM

Warm assurence , this gave a cosy feeling of togetherness

Hope

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2005-01-28 10:43 AM

love the soft warm glow of this - it wraps one in velvet smooth pleasure

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2005-01-28 10:53 AM

ah...very nice

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

10 posted 2005-01-28 12:04 PM

a beautiful light of love. well done JL.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

11 posted 2005-01-28 12:07 PM

Beautiful!!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

12 posted 2005-01-29 09:04 AM

JL...
I read this several times before I could even respond.
How eloquent you have written this beautiful work.
TD

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

13 posted 2005-01-29 10:25 AM

Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

*AIM = Alli4000* Journal!

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

14 posted 2005-01-29 01:18 PM

Like the subtle.

Dave

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