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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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While your away I’ll hang my wall drug Wearing the cap of 50 states Honesty, the killing fields Cutting my over the ears hair Cuz your sound messes my make-up With misterioso voice…and yes The musica translates choice Thank you for that, you feed me Alphabet soup..Without bed side manners Or Rules…. You make me a wanna-be Zen Monk Lifting your bad moods Soaking them In green tea What say we rediscover the creek pool? Standing every house on its back Gazing at the blue corn moon With ancient water and cottonwoods Walking the tarmac of Heaven with you Would be like a well nourished word None of which stays behind You’re an animal with 50 fingers Think I’ll name you soft wind Before you wings come forth Taking me to your self taught nights The ones that pronounce reference books Telling me I’m your political event Current and one of a kind With no pre-sale tags Just obscene livelihood Teach me what you know Embroider me winged fabric Dunflowers & daisies would be nice Visual & sonic pleasure Clashing symbols of visa versa Babe, just wait until you get home They’ll be biscuits in the oven Opps…so much for safe manliness? Babe, it's cold outside? [This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-27-2005 11:32 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you sure have a way with words I'm in awe |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
Thank you for that, you feed me Alphabet soup..Without bed side manners Or Rules…. ~~~ It is indeed cold outside... grab the warm and head for the flames. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
With misterioso voice…and yes The musica translates choice Thank you for that, you feed me Alphabet soup..Without bed side manners Or Rules…. this rocks Lee, and again you have provided such an insightful read. HUGS |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this -Juju Juju - 1.) a magic charm or fetish 2.)Magic 3.)A taboo connected woth the use of magic |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Your words come to life through your visualizations in living. You are->one-heck-of-a-great-poet! Enjoyed the read. JL  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this has got to be one of my favorites - biscuts in the oven - oh yes - lovin' every word of this  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yep~you sure do have a way with words~ and i so enjoy reading them |
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