Open Poetry #34 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
My last, this to you for the wait is too long and even silence has its wake. Putting to sleep the unimportance that fills each night, allowing the thoughts to rest beneath priorities, an initiation hard to learn. But the truth blisters and the world is wide. Time can not be replayed, the warring within is over, being stranded in the you a thing of the past, starting today... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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whiskey![]()
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
good for you, we all need to break away sometime nice writing ![]() Julie |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, Reads good to me. ![]() |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Time can not be replayed, the warring within is over, being stranded in the you a thing of the past, starting today... sometimes easier said then done...but...I will send you well wishes and prayers to give you strength to do such... Your poetry is marvelous.....and aches with a tremendous heart |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a piece with much strength! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Time can not be replayed, the warring within is over, being stranded in the you" Perfect! Enjoyed. JL ![]() |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
starting today - yes ![]() If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
New beginnings can be a wonderful thing and setting the heart free is a flight beyond compare...*hugs* |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Good for you, my friend! Hang in there! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
" Starting today ..... sounds like a good positive step Hope |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
I always enjoy reading your words, No matter how sad or painful Gloom |
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