Open Poetry #34 |
Life Changes ( A Wranxian Mask) |
Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Life Changes In my deepest, darkest hour, Came the purest, crimson flower. It touched my heart with essence rose, Stirring me from deep repose. It gifted me with scent so sweet, I soon became a soul complete. I found my way to Shangri-la, On mountain top I stood in awe. The skies were blue with crystal light, The stars and moon filled up the night. The air was warm like zephyr breeze, And dreams hung down from heaven's trees. I felt a peace not known before, As I walked through Eden's door. Never shall I wail or wallow, For the stars I now will follow. My life had changed in darkest hour, All because of crimson flower. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I've gotta say this is our Sey too...the rhyme leads me to believe it is... and if not, still, very well done Linda! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ooooh lovely...I too think this is our Sy guy! Well done Linda! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
An absolute Sy for your costume of choice... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very well done, indeed Sy seems to be a favorite costume this year, and rightfully so. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Yeppers! Sigh's the guy! It was my small attempt at honouring him by attempting to emulate his sonneteering daily offerings. ~ It is beyond my comprehension that he has literally written thousands of them! ~ and each one is a pearl of wisdom and beauty ~ with delightful humour thrown in for good measure! Warm hugs to you all ~ and especially to Mr. T.! EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Linda, this is lovely, what a beautiful write! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes Linda - could tell write off it was Sy - well done - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel In a poem of one My poems outdone One genuflect uncommon bow It's all my age will allow |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, Mr. T., you're not outdone, For you're forever number one. Your sonnets sing each blessed day, In to our hearts with sunny ray. To you I bow with great respect, In fact you merit genuflect! 2 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Bowing to both of you. Beautiful creation indeed. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gentle Spirit ~ His rhyme and metre are impeccable so it was a daunting task to emulate his writing! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Enchantress ~ Yes, Nancy! You had guessed it correctly! He's amazing, isn't he! ~ and so prolific! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sunshine ~ It was a costume I enjoyed wearing! But I couldn't keep up with Sir Sigh and serve such sweet sonnets as he does on a daily basis! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Wranx ~ Hi, Ed! I loved reading all of the poems that were written as a result of your challenge! ~ and I am pleased that you liked mine! Thanx and thanx, Wranx! May your own poetry forever light our way! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eric ~ Beauty is in the eye of the beholder ~ and I am glad that you were one of the beholders of my poem! Hugs to you, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Little Winged One ~ "Lovely" and "beautiful" ? ~ Why thank you! Have a happy day! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan ~ I consider it a very fine compliment when a reader can see some of Sigh in my poem! Thank you, Sparkles! Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Margherita ~ Thank you! ~ and I bow to you as well for your gift and spirit! Loves 'n hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
p s ~ Thank you, Darlin' Dixie! Hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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