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Save myself first
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Save myself first |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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i dont think i want to take any more of the medicine you want me to swallow, i used to take it when i was a little girl and it made me feel yucky then, you're not a very nice wolf are you? it serves me right  i shoudnt have peeped in knowing the warning of the no trespassing signs at your guarded gate, but i pushed for entry, only to share some of the magic carrots i thought you'd enjoy, like some of the other bunny rabbit friends of mine do, i will do my about face now and take the high grass or is it the low grass home, who knows? i'm just a dopey bottlehead blonde anyhow, my bunnyrabbit shrink told me the other morning to stay clear of big bad wolves that don't want to be saved anyhow... she told me to stop trying to heal them that that is the very reason i've come to sit on her couch afterall she keeps telling me this: Save myself first......................... ***thanks cousin*** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amen. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
you can climb me if it helps just no high heals they hurt my eyes enjoyed this search babe!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
i dont think i want to take any more of the medicine you want me to swallow, well that says it all, Michele... Think we are on the same wavelength this morning  and my hair just keeps getting lighter and lighter hmmm...M M |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess It's always one on one, so take care of the one.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you know...I saw myself in this |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"i'm just a dopey bottlehead blonde anyhow" Male cow cakes... You are smart enough to seek help.... "my bunnyrabbit shrink told me the other morning" A "dopey" head would not have the sense to do that... "Save myself first" Perect advice... The poem has nice structure, easy to read ...content is clear...I like it and my disagreement with some of the content doesn't really matter, your effort to express is what I admire most... ____________ice/ford ><> [This message has been edited by ice (01-27-2005 10:43 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
totally agree with all the above and your not a bottle head blond...careful, you keep telling yourself that long enough, you'll begin to believe it...sooooo CUT THAT OUT!!!!!! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This is an excellent rant - and yes, look to yourself, for when you are overflowing, then you can give so much more to others wihtout losing yourself in the process - and you one smart bunny wabbit too! Cute as they come - susanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I never bought that Lil'Red Riding Hood trip anyhow, Michele . . . *smile* I have missed your writing, sheesh see what we get for being nice? |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
God Michelle, can I identify with this one!! As usual, your writing IS excellent! |
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