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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2005-01-26 06:16 PM





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GG
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Lost in thought
1 posted 2005-01-26 06:31 PM


And this
is lovely,
as well.

Great write.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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2 posted 2005-01-26 06:40 PM


now I'd say that!!

nice ink on the ink suesea

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3 posted 2005-01-26 06:47 PM


SEA~
Just a lovely, lovely presentation sweetie~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

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4 posted 2005-01-26 07:07 PM


Nice one SEA!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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5 posted 2005-01-26 08:15 PM


Very nice indeed.

JL


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In Your Poetic Mind
6 posted 2005-01-26 10:41 PM


SEA~

this moment of you is wonderful....reading between and within all the lines...I'd say perfect ink.....hugsssss you....

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

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7 posted 2005-01-26 10:49 PM


Ah that unconditional love how it makes me gag!  Just kidding, you know I am right?  Lovely the entire picture/poem Susan.
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8 posted 2005-01-26 10:51 PM


Absolutely beautiful , someone who loves you for who you truly are , sea you are a star

Hope

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displaced
9 posted 2005-01-27 12:13 PM


beautiful
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10 posted 2005-01-27 03:51 AM



"moments
of me
depicted
in skin"

Love this, Susan...

"When the power of love overcomes the love
of power the world will know peace."
--Jimi Hendrix

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11 posted 2005-01-27 08:28 AM


done as only you could... permanent ink written as poetry on your soul.
way cool Sea-girlie.

Among the kingdom of the winds ...
perhaps there is one of elegant mind,
who has no need to intrude on the solitude of single things.

CB

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12 posted 2005-01-27 08:46 AM


fantastic read and write
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13 posted 2005-01-27 10:00 AM


I loved this mom!!!!!!!   you are awesome.  The poem was perfect for the picture.     

Love ya lots,

Jezz

you know he really wants me

Susan
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14 posted 2005-01-27 11:32 AM


Bravo!  Love this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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Canada eh.
15 posted 2005-01-27 12:08 PM


This is beautiful Sue..the words and the pic.
Very nicely done.


Thank you so much for staying in touch~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

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16 posted 2005-01-27 01:50 PM


Love it!!
Is that your tattoo? I am thinking about getting another one.

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17 posted 2005-01-27 04:30 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

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18 posted 2005-01-27 05:41 PM


thank you all very much for your great replies yes, that is my tattoo, one of seven
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19 posted 2005-01-27 06:34 PM


Very nice...James
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20 posted 2005-01-27 06:47 PM


after sharing my own, i'm glad someone else did this :-)
i'm glad i was able to read this... thanks to a certain person who lead me in the direction of it. the layers to your words are wonderful!!

~~~~~~~
"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache" ~neruda

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21 posted 2005-01-28 08:56 AM


thank you James
Snow...wow great to have you come read me thank you for the nice reply, I admire your poetry

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22 posted 2005-01-28 10:16 PM


I've never had anyone sketch me before even with their finger... (hmmmm) I don't think...  and I'm figuring that I don't believe that actually anyone would want to, but the thought of it here does sound terribly passionate and romantic to me. A very very nice graphic and poem. -Bob

[This message has been edited by Lighthousebob (01-28-2005 10:56 PM).]

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23 posted 2005-01-29 08:27 AM


Looks to be a lovely liquid moment


Very nice!

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24 posted 2005-01-29 08:54 AM


Loved this! Absolutely loved it!
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25 posted 2005-01-29 08:07 PM


smiling wide

revealing and lovely SEA


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