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sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

0 posted 2005-01-25 12:37 PM

I can get lost
In the thought of you
Wondering what it would be like
To touch your tender skin
To find myself staring in your eyes
To feel the warmth of your soul

I can only imagine
What you are to me
As we haven't even met
2 stars in a galaxy of light
2 leaves falling in a autumn breeze
2 embers burning on a firelit night

To be one with you
Everyday and Everynight
To dry your tears
on a hard weary trial
To lift you up
and make you feel worthwhile
To stop and just listen
when your voice chooses to sing
To envelop all your glamour
Like a beautiful Diamond Ring

To be one with you
To be a part of you
To smile because of you
To be one with you

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-25 01:01 PM

the entire poem was most certainly embracing, but to smile because of you....
simply said...waved to me from afar...and had me at hello....smiles

This was lovely

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-01-25 01:33 PM

To be one with you
To be apart of you

not sure if you meant

to be a part of you..the apart you used means not together or distanced

enjoyed your thoughts
M

sim0riah
Member

since 2004-09-07

Posts 253
Wyoming USA

3 posted 2005-01-25 01:36 PM

Thanks M.. I didn't even notice that..It's fixed now

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2005-01-25 02:09 PM

You are welcome... *s

M

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-25 07:10 PM

beautiful...

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

6 posted 2005-01-25 07:44 PM

This is a KEEPER!!! I can't count the number of times I have felt this way! Thank you for sharing this, Richard!

Becka

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

7 posted 2005-01-28 12:01 PM

Lovely~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2005-01-28 12:07 PM

beautiful~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2005-01-28 06:40 PM

Nice romantic writing...James

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