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wandering glider
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0 posted 2005-01-24 06:34 PM



Moon growing full, bright
On cloudless winter night, white
My solitude, fright

It's a cold, reflected light
Under which I, lonely, write


glider



© Copyright 2005 wandering glider - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2005-01-24 08:21 PM


Glider~

'It's a cold, reflected light
Under which I, lonely, write'


You reach too, too many of us with this thought~

Nicely penned~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2005-01-24 10:09 PM


Pretty words that scape the lonely night very well.
TD

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Gaia
3 posted 2005-01-25 11:46 PM


Very nice night write, wandering glider!
GG
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4 posted 2005-01-26 03:49 AM


*sigh* Been there, done that.
Well expressed.
Hoping that the next night isn't so alone.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Susan Caldwell
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5 posted 2005-01-26 09:18 AM


Excellent!!!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Tiersdin
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6 posted 2005-01-26 12:43 PM


Enjoyed, WG, looking forward to reading more!


~tier

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7 posted 2005-01-26 09:19 PM


Nicely written.

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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8 posted 2005-01-26 10:45 PM


there is a beautiful, but sad depth to this....it touches...

~~*~~
My Shadow is the only one
that walks beside me
~~**~~

LeeJ
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9 posted 2005-01-27 08:31 AM


Beautifully felt and written
froggy
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10 posted 2005-02-04 09:44 PM


This is sweet.
I enjoyed the read

:-)

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