Open Poetry #34 |
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Blame It on the Snow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Blinded The last straw...I sip from, the one that is cinched to let in no air... It is there that your words have been sucked into and those of mine say "I no longer care." When the notion of loving you becomes an ocean of twisted threads when the words are "bigger than" and the song becomes titled "To Dread" There are no words that can take it away... the hurt of the uncounted kind. So the threats of replacement with others is sewn deeply into this mind. The last straw...I sip from leaves a poison taste to the tongue. Untitled, this heart that once loved even though, just because, maybe, perhaps... no longer is one to be won. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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SEA![]() ![]()
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wow....this is fantastic. ![]() |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
sad the way it seems to go like that ... but it's so true though isn't it ![]() wonderful writing If you continue |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The last straw...I sip from leaves a poison taste to the tongue. it blows, when it has to be so harsh and bitter, no redeeming value in the initial good feelings and expectations about the person. ![]() |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It is really good to see you writing like this. Dave |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SEA, thank you for the read and comment...sometimes the lack of emotion from one can make me lose hope. Rex, so nice to see you..I hope you have been well ![]() Michele, it's those expectations...I have to learn to not have any ~~ I like how you can always read between my lines...thanks Dave, I always enjoy your comments. Thank you for being here. M |
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*Alli4000*![]()
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow....amazing write! ![]() ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Yeoch!! I could hear the camel's back breaking ![]() |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The last straw is the last straw. Very well expressed, Maureen! |
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