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1slick_lady
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0 posted 2005-01-22 08:27 AM


There Is


for me there is
no lonelier place on earth
than the space between
the warmth of tears
and ice


© Copyright 2005 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2005-01-22 08:31 AM


Hi Helen. This is so sad. I felt the place you spoke of while reading this. Well written indeed!
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2 posted 2005-01-22 09:32 AM


understood
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3 posted 2005-01-22 09:34 AM


....and they don't melt much of it at a time, do they?

Your poetry is beautifully done, but sometimes hard to read.

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4 posted 2005-01-22 11:12 AM


Sorry to say I've been to that place. It was a long walk out of it to where alone was finally acceptable (sort of, kinda).

The silence is a howling deafening, the plunge from warm and hopeful air to frigid water a shock but humans are incredibly resilient. As always short but pointed.

Poets against the war is redundant

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5 posted 2005-01-22 11:20 PM




~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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6 posted 2005-01-22 11:23 PM


From one Helen to another - excellent write!
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7 posted 2005-01-23 12:32 PM


as always, i ache with you red
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