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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2005-01-22 06:12 AM

Moon rivaling stars
Stark white willing shades of cream
Brighter than streetlamps

Bathing all in pale sheer glow
Man’s cool and lovely mistress

North winds grow jealous
Raging contempt, dragging clouds
Hiding her paleness

Foggy veils slipped between us
Even wolf hears moon crying

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (01-22-2005 09:53 AM).]

EvocativeVerse2
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1 posted 2005-01-22 06:20 AM

I absolutely love this. Has a Celtic feel in my ears Sunshine. In fact I love it so much I am going to not only keep this one...but study it because I sure feel inspired by it! Bravo...dearest friend!

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passing shadows
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displaced

2 posted 2005-01-22 10:07 AM

oh yeah...nice ending line

DavePage
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3 posted 2005-01-22 03:11 PM

A nice subtle underlaying.

Dave

MGROVES

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california

4 posted 2005-01-22 03:24 PM

i sense these too
very nice

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-22 07:20 PM

Great write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

ice
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6 posted 2005-01-23 12:23 PM

How wonderful, man
In his primitiveness, claims
Still the moon, mistress

The wolf in him hears echoes
(his own) bouncing back at him.

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7 posted 2005-01-23 12:26 PM

Scintillating.....this shines with a light of its own...and I wish I'd written it.

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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

8 posted 2005-01-23 12:28 PM

Dear Karilea, here you have identified with the moon and the result is very very charming.

Love, Margherita

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

9 posted 2005-01-23 12:54 PM

Impressive as always, your poetic verses are a true treat for the eyes.

JL

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

10 posted 2005-01-23 09:04 PM

I enjoy reading your poetry. This is beautiful. As always.

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