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Hast Thou Brushed a Morn in Hues of Cerise?
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Hast Thou Brushed a Morn in Hues of Cerise? |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279
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Hast Thou Brushed a Morn in Hues of Cerise? Hast thou brushed a morn in hues of cerise? Or stood midst the highlands and sought release? Hast thou heard the laughing of a west wind? Then darling thou knows' the smiles I’ve grinned. I’ve seen rainbows birthed in cerulean skies, Leapt in tidal waters as they did rise, Ceded my heart to each breath that I’ve sighed, And there’s naught my love that I’d brush aside. ‘Tis sweet this life that’s been given to me, She givest pleasure in all that I see, Yet fairest, the kiss, I’d have from your lips, For beloved thou art my lunar eclipse. My heart, these words, will forever be thine, Love is a temple and thou art my shrine. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yes..loved the line.." Love is a temple and thou art my shrine." Would be nice to be admired in such a devoted and passionate way! She is blessed to have your love and poetry! ~ARh  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Beautiful - pure and simply beautiful -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kevin......always a romantic escape when I read your lovely poems!  .......jo |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ahhha... this makes soft sighs... well done!  |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
Cool sonnet. Had a kind of celtic whorl in mine ear. Poets against the war is redundant |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Thank-you ARH. I am glad you liked this poem. This is my little pick-me up for the day. I have had the world's worst day. I broke my glasses and it will be Tuesday before I can get in to the optometrist to get an eye exam so I can get a new pair. It is very difficult to write with squinty eyes. LOL Thank-you Susan. Always a pleasure when you like one of my poems. I am not half the writer that you are...but I try. Thank-you iliana. How kind and wonderful of you to say such sweet things about my poetry. If I make one person smile...or one heart sigh...these words were worth the effort. Even without glasses. Hello SEA. Glad you stopped by for the read this morning. Hope the day brings many good things your way and thank-you for the kind words. It makes me smile when you say such sweet things about my poetry. RSWells. Thank you indeed for the praise. I am humbled. That is a very sweet comment and having you recognize it as being based loosely on the sonnet form...well that is the greatest praise I could have received. Many, many thanks. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dear Sire, see, yes, for these my eyes have brushed the likes of such sunrise, my fingers glazed each line of gleam, before the sunburst crack'd the dream... ~*~ Oh you're naughty...inspiring me that way! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hello Sunshine. Good morning to you. I am very glad you stopped in for a read with me as I pull this all nighter. LOL! Eventually I really got to go to bed. Loved the reply dearest friend. You honor me with your weave of words. Thanks! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooo...aaaahhhhhhh you are stunning! |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Thank-you Dixie. I am glad you stopped in for a read today. It always brings a smile to my face when you compliment my work. I feel truly humbled by all the lovely things you ladies say. You gift me with such pretties...makes me feel like my work has worth this morning. Hugs! |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hello Love, Loved this piece.Its beautiful but everything you write is. Hugs ;-) Amour Vous Within this heart you'll find love |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Thank you froggy. I wouldn't say everything I write is beautiful...but lately all I write is romantic pieces. LOL! It just seems easier to write about something worthwhile as of late. Glad you liked this and thanks for being my friend. We have traveled this road together many years now...I am, and always have been, your buddy. Hugs...Kevin. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wonderful write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
honestly....i have tried to say something here that wouldn't have my tongue out in front of me tripping me up, but, it looks like i haven't been able to stop that from happening does it. lol...... you have me in a swoon all over again. how easy it is to fall into the sway of these words. i think i'll just stay here a while. ok? ok! *smile* i love reading you. mmhmm. *wink* ~me "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Kevin, you have always made me smile with your poetry.You have the magic touch,know how to reach deep within. Yes we have travelled this road together a long time and glad to be sharing it with you. Hugs Amour Vous :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Alli4000 thank-you for stopping in for the read tonight. Glad you liked this one. My muse is a great inspiration. (LOL!) |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Lady Snow! Mmm...so very glad you came in to read this. Did it make you smile love? You sweetie are such great inspiration. It seems like lately all I have to do is think of you and these word pretties just flow from my pen. Hugs! Love - moi! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 OK, if I can add my thoughts here?this is one of the coolest writes I've read in a long while....a real beauty |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
make me smile? now is that a silly question or what... how could you not see the smile in the swoon. ;-) lady snow? lol....how formal is that.... but then it does fit that very romantic poet soul of yours.  "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Why thank-you Midnitesun. My I am going to get a swelled head with all these wonderful compliments you all have been gifting me with today. Thank-you everyone...this is really appreciated. It does the heart well to know there are so many out there who too can feel these sweet moments I have penned here this day. God bless each and every one of you. Humbly yours - Kevin. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you could melt one's heart glad i stopped to read always enjoy hearing romance from a romantic heart |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi MGROVES. Thank-you for stopping in to read my poem. This piece has done far better then anticipated I must confess. Honestly I thought it would get 9 hits...no more then that for sure. People sure are proving me wrong today. Not that I mind...but honestly I rarely follow a poems' life here on these pages. One moment it is posted...then it is but a memory for a select few. Each of you has brought a smile to my lips this day...thank-you all dear friends. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You have a romantic soul and a "pasttime feel" to your poetry M |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hello nakdthoughts. Thank-you for the compliment about this piece. I am not sure what is meant by the words, "passtime feel," but I know whatever it be it was made with sincerety. Everyone has been very receptive of this piece and it gladdens my heart immensely to feel the love all have proffered. Thank-you so very much dearest friends. |
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D.Lester Young Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219Austin, Tx |
You did a romantic dance with the words, very nice. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Deeply roimantic. And you take the reader into the beauty of your images. thank you, it's beautiful! Love, Margherita |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
D.Lester Young - My heartfelt thanks go out to you for the kind words. Thank-you very much. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Margherita Thank-you very much. I am so pleased so many people have enjoyed this poem. Makes the writing of it all that much more enjoyable. Your compliments have touched me deeply today. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Kevin I'm late to read this lovely poem...but I'm so glad that I'm not too late! Very much enjoyed! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wonderful write. Enjoyed this very much. JL |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
An almost Medieval feel to this, and a darn wonderful one at that. I hope if Ron has the energy for a new book this one will be in it. Exquisite! The most beautiful thing we can experience is the mysterious. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Martie...your kinds words are never to late dearest friend. J.L. - Always a pleasure when you stop by for a read. Mysteria - That left me speechless. It is a very rare occassion when that heppens. LOL! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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