Open Poetry #34 |
Not The Light |
babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
No omen, no warning, slow beat the hands in sleep, such instinct needs no light or waking, shaking the heavy changes of the heart in breaststrokes across the heavens, no omen, no warning could slow the soul for the heart's darkest sorcery, slow beat turns the hands in sleep, to keep to the deep shade, immersed in the thirst of the unruly night, where the soul truly longs to be, not the light. 2004 copyright babygirLPress **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I hear drums thumping in the dark... Nice! |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
thanks wranx... the drumskins...always sound behind my thoughts...glad you can hear them too... love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
my favourite thusfar |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
hey A~ thanks for checking this out... much love, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
no omen, no warning could slow the soul for the heart's darkest sorcery, slow beat turns the hands in sleep, to keep to the deep shade, immersed in the thirst of the unruly night, where the soul truly longs to be, not the light. (chuckling).. not sure I agree... but it is well done ma'am.. |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
lol...and I thought you might have a bone to pick with this, Chief...but I let it go anyway...lol **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Dark or light.. I think it depends on the depth of the wound... Well done!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Susan...you have are adept at reading thru me...lol thank you love... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I hear the beating drum, loud and clear.. well done Babygirl... |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
Gentle Spirit... ah...thank you kindly, love... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Primal thumps in the night! Well done! I felt moved to read this out loud! ~ and it gave me goosebumps! Love & Light ~ not the Dark (it's too scary!)lol EA |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
EA~ lol...thank you for feeling me... **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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