Open Poetry #34 |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I wish you there, where your mind leads when your words hold back there... where the skin is exposed and need is emptied into blank pages there... your scribbling an art form outlined to be painted, filled in there... where the imagination becomes real and the kisses deepen there... where the release sets one free to recover, to be rescued there... where once a heart was ransomed at too high a price there~~ M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
where poets glissen in the moonlight There... A lady writes of her insight There.... and touches all who read Excellent prose mi lady! |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
i wish, too. i can feel the longing in your words. Rf |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful M |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
You have such a beautiful spirit that shows in your poetry. Very much enjoyed. miscellanea |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
When someone reads words you have written it is, as if, you feel the message is for you and you alone. You have that talent "M". Dave |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
here, there and everywhere...... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Great write. Enjoyed.... There. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Amazing write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This reminds me of a long ago challenge ~ I wish you were there, here with me ~ *smiling* We've come a long way.... haven't we? |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
amazing |
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