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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2005-01-21 08:42 AM

I wish you there,
where your mind leads
when your words hold back
there...

where the skin is exposed
and need is emptied
into blank pages
there...

your scribbling an art form
outlined to be painted,
filled in
there...

where the imagination
becomes real
and the kisses deepen
there...

where the release
sets one free
to recover, to be rescued
there...

where once a heart
was ransomed
at too high a price
there~~

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-21 09:02 AM

where poets glissen in the moonlight
There...
A lady writes of her insight
There....

and touches all who read

Excellent prose mi lady!

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

2 posted 2005-01-21 09:07 AM

i wish, too. i can feel the longing in your words.

Rf

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-21 09:08 AM

beautiful M

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2005-01-21 10:29 AM

You have such a beautiful spirit that shows in your poetry. Very much enjoyed.

miscellanea

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2005-01-21 02:25 PM

When someone reads words you have written it is, as if, you feel the message is for you and you alone.

You have that talent "M".

Dave

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

6 posted 2005-01-21 05:52 PM

here, there and everywhere......

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2005-01-21 05:55 PM

Great write.
Enjoyed.... There.

JL

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-01-21 07:13 PM

Amazing write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2005-01-21 09:43 PM

This reminds me
of a long ago challenge
~ I wish you were there,
here with me ~

*smiling*

We've come a long way....

haven't we?

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-01-21 09:52 PM

amazing

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