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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-21 04:39 AM

cinnamon dust and vanilla leather

I feel you
eating me with your eyes
while you sting my want
with words on
skewers of nouns piercing
me along the spine
curvingfingers_within
  where sedona and mountains
rise
  rise to your apex
for my
  masquerade to drop
leaves along the creek
there's no loopholes
in love
we flow
   and strokeeachother
past
        chaste yesterdays
and breathe
cinnamon dust and vanilla leather
thrusting something we can feel
beyond today

1/21/05©SDT
if you want to see this with the intended image, write me, from an addy i can write you back at, so the link to the image doesn't have to be broken.

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

[This message has been edited by Snow (01-21-2005 10:15 AM).]

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

1 posted 2005-01-21 07:32 AM

this I enjoyed

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2005-01-21 07:45 AM

I feel you
eating me with your eyes
while you sting my want
with words

one of the best expressions ever~~

M

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-01-21 07:57 AM

ms snow.. very much enjoyed this..and yes to seeing it with the image too. D

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2005-01-21 08:06 AM

Snow
As I said your no icicle growing upside down
Good write, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-01-21 09:39 AM

nice...yes, the image would be awesome, please

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2005-01-21 10:07 AM

I loved this snow and yes please, I would love to see the image as you always post such beautiful ones to go with your awesome poetry.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-01-21 11:03 AM

How did I miss this? What a wonderfully rich write...amazing you are...

I loved this

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2005-01-21 12:10 PM

liked it

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

9 posted 2005-01-21 02:28 PM

Magic.

Dave

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

10 posted 2005-01-21 07:13 PM

^_^ Great write! ^_^

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

11 posted 2005-01-21 11:56 PM

LOVE this and you know darn well I want to see it with the image...write me! LOL! This is EXCELLENT! Glad I did not go to Davenport this weekend...wouldn't have seen this if I had! Woohoo!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

12 posted 2005-01-22 01:06 AM

You are the queen of sensuous script!

......jo

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

13 posted 2005-01-22 01:08 AM

breath taking....amazing

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

14 posted 2005-01-23 01:30 PM

Hey Snow,
Could you send this with the image.
Would love to see it.

Thank-you

:-)

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

15 posted 2005-01-23 03:36 PM

This is balanced right on the edge. Well done!

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