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desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-21 04:39 AM

cinnamon dust and vanilla leather

I feel you
eating me with your eyes
while you sting my want
with words on
skewers of nouns piercing
me along the spine
  where sedona and mountains
  rise to your apex
for my
  masquerade to drop
leaves along the creek
there's no loopholes
in love
we flow
   and strokeeachother
        chaste yesterdays
and breathe
cinnamon dust and vanilla leather
thrusting something we can feel
beyond today

if you want to see this with the intended image, write me, from an addy i can write you back at, so the link to the image doesn't have to be broken.  

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"

[This message has been edited by Snow (01-21-2005 10:15 AM).]

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1 posted 2005-01-21 07:32 AM

this I enjoyed
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2005-01-21 07:45 AM

I feel you
eating me with your eyes
while you sting my want
with words

one of the best expressions ever~~


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3 posted 2005-01-21 07:57 AM

ms snow.. very much enjoyed this..and yes to seeing it with the image too.   D
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4 posted 2005-01-21 08:06 AM

As I said your no icicle growing upside down
Good write, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-01-21 09:39 AM

nice...yes, the image would be awesome, please
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6 posted 2005-01-21 10:07 AM

I loved this snow and yes please, I would love to see the image as you always post such beautiful ones to go with your awesome poetry.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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7 posted 2005-01-21 11:03 AM

How did I miss this?  What a wonderfully rich write...amazing you are...

I loved this

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8 posted 2005-01-21 12:10 PM

liked it
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9 posted 2005-01-21 02:28 PM



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10 posted 2005-01-21 07:13 PM

^_^ Great write! ^_^


Happy 2005!

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11 posted 2005-01-21 11:56 PM

LOVE this and you know darn well I want to see it with the image...write me! LOL! This is EXCELLENT! Glad I did not go to Davenport this weekend...wouldn't have seen this if I had! Woohoo!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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12 posted 2005-01-22 01:06 AM

You are the queen of sensuous script!
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with you
13 posted 2005-01-22 01:08 AM

breath taking....amazing
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14 posted 2005-01-23 01:30 PM

Hey Snow,
  Could you send this with the image.
Would love to see it.



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in the shadows
15 posted 2005-01-23 03:36 PM

This is balanced right on the edge.  Well done!
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