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The Big Alone
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The Big Alone |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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The Big Alone Well I ain't no preacher I'm no heart savin saint But I am a believer In what is and what ain't There's no kid left in me Can't change things I regret Feelin down at forty-three Ain't found no true love yet Chorus I'm lost out here in the big alone Wonderin what my life's about I feel empty to the bone My time is runnin out Need a love to call my own Need a heart to lean on....out here in the big alone I did some good-bye lovin With some Mary's & Janes They all gave me somethin But nothin I could save No more Romeo disguise Can't keep livin this way Need love to ease my mind The same lover everyday Chorus But I'm lost out here in the big alone Wonderin what my life's about I feel empty to the bone My time is runnin out Need a love to call my own Need a heart to lean on....out here in the big alone Bridge: When the dawn comes soft and gentle An I face the new daylight I need someone right beside me Who'll be there day and night. Chorus I'm lost out here in the big alone Everybody talkin crazy I feel empty to the bone Can't hear what they're saying Need a love to call my own Need a heart to lean on......out here in the big alone |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent! Great song. JL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
did some good-bye lovin With some Mary's & Janes They all gave me somethin But nothin I could save Love that verse, and know the feeling! Enjoyed the music, ethome~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
excellent |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Brilliant. Dave |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
wonderful lyrics Eric. I enjoyed the tunes... |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks JL for the excellent word that's very kind of you. James good to hear from you and thanks! Blues S thanks for the comments and relating to that verse...That's what the songwriter is always trying to establish is the connection. Passing...Always good to hear from you I appreciate the read and the kind response. Dave I don't get the brilliant word very often so I thank you very much I appreciate the kind reply. Gentle....Thanks you for reading and responding to this piece I sure appreciaate it a lot. Alli Thanks for dropping in to read this. Eric IF YOU HAVE TO JUDGE SOMEONE DO IT ON THE SIDE OF MERCY AND LET TIME SEASON THE RESULTS. |
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