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Ericc
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0 posted 2005-01-20 03:55 PM



In sorrow...

Let my fingers be
your tears.

Dissolving in a moist embrace.

Knowing how deeply that
I hold you.

© Copyright 2005 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
1 posted 2005-01-20 04:11 PM


very touching...wish I knew someone like that again~~

M

Daniel J D
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2 posted 2005-01-20 06:09 PM


Indee very warm.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2005-01-20 06:31 PM


The most healing love...
Beautiful write Eric.
TD

DavePage
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4 posted 2005-01-20 06:54 PM


Eric

Very personal - Yes excellent.

Dave

Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-01-20 09:27 PM


and a sigh-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Spine Grinder
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Standing In Silence...
6 posted 2005-01-20 09:40 PM


This is wonderful. I loved it, very sensual. Awesome job.

"Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether

"I shut my eyes and hold my cries to myself"~ Taproot

A Romantic Heart
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7 posted 2005-01-21 10:43 PM


Thank you..thank you so much...I needed to be held tonight and your words embraced me to do just that!

~Love and Hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...
8 posted 2005-01-21 10:56 PM


This was so beautiful, Eric!  

And I second your comment, nakdthoughts!  

God bless,

Becka

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2005-01-22 10:06 AM


touching and tender
Tiersdin
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east coast
10 posted 2005-01-22 10:29 PM


I am always amazed at how few the words but so deep the meaning...

lovely, Eric...

~tier

Margherita
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Eternity
11 posted 2005-01-23 10:53 AM


So deeply ... to feel safe and loved forever.

Achingly beautiful, dear Eric!

I love you,
Margherita

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12 posted 2005-01-23 03:42 PM


Great write!!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
13 posted 2005-01-23 03:43 PM


*sigh* warmth felt
Snow
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desert flower looking for rain
14 posted 2005-01-23 04:41 PM


well this just makes me want to cry.

loving it!! well done!

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

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15 posted 2005-01-24 03:15 PM


Incredibly beautiful... and yes... one who is with us in sorrow... is with us forever.
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with you
16 posted 2005-01-25 12:30 PM


"Knowing how deeply that
I hold you."

beautiful


Susan Caldwell
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17 posted 2005-01-25 11:31 AM


moving.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

GG
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Lost in thought
18 posted 2005-01-26 03:42 AM


So delicate, it made me sigh...
this is excellent, sir.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

jellybeans
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19 posted 2005-01-26 09:30 AM


I ditto nakdthoughts on this one.....great write
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