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In Sorrow |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
In sorrow... Let my fingers be your tears. Dissolving in a moist embrace. Knowing how deeply that I hold you. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very touching...wish I knew someone like that again~~ M |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Indee very warm. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The most healing love... Beautiful write Eric. TD |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Eric Very personal - Yes excellent. Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
 and a sigh-Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
This is wonderful. I loved it, very sensual. Awesome job. "Cuz I'm broken, when I'm lonesome, and I don't feel right when you're gone away..."~ Seether |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Thank you..thank you so much...I needed to be held tonight and your words embraced me to do just that! ~Love and Hugs ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
This was so beautiful, Eric! And I second your comment, nakdthoughts!  God bless, Becka  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
touching and tender |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I am always amazed at how few the words but so deep the meaning... lovely, Eric... ~tier  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So deeply ... to feel safe and loved forever. Achingly beautiful, dear Eric! I love you, Margherita  |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write!!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
*sigh* warmth felt |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
well this just makes me want to cry. loving it!! well done! "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Incredibly beautiful... and yes... one who is with us in sorrow... is with us forever. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Knowing how deeply that I hold you." beautiful |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
moving. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
So delicate, it made me sigh... this is excellent, sir. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I ditto nakdthoughts on this one.....great write |
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