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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2005-01-20 07:51 AM


Matters of Life

Straying from work
Saving chance to chance
Attributed by hand
Beautiful deities’ scope
Inner complex belongings
Of which affect interchangeably
Backdrop for inquiry
Incidental to 3 entities
Intellect,
Exploitation
Tests
A stepchild with roots
Counterbalanced with
Sometimes the unpleasant
Trailing back to antiquity
Sometimes mild
Impulsive
Mature
Bestial
Connecting a necklace
Around my neck…invisible
A weave of north and south
Blends of synonymous formulations
Counterbalanced
Knowing what willed know
Clusters of observations…nanotechnology
Trained little TV cameras
Acts and decisions leading…
Invention in a field of inaugurations
Fusing processes meeting my place of birth
Understanding the nature of deepness
Platitudes of methodologies
Lineage provided by theoretical counterparts
Processing warm tradition
With cold blue modern arts
A flow chart of intelligence
Human currents of valuations
Thus, linguistically reintegrated in facial expression
Social intercourse of the soul, mind and heart
One influences what we must admire
The blessings of emotions in attire

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Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2005-01-20 07:58 AM


lee j

how we turn the pages
is what is important
not what or if we read on them

you cause me to see this
with your words



Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2005-01-20 08:00 AM


LeeJ
One influences what we must admire
The blessings of emotions in attire
Enjoyed the read. Good morning

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2005-01-20 08:06 AM


when I "grow up" I want to write just like you

M

JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2005-01-20 11:21 AM


"One influences what we must admire
The blessings of emotions in attire"

So true!  You have penned a beauty here.

JL



Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

5 posted 2005-01-20 03:49 PM


What a masterful use of language!

Eric

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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Champaign, IL
6 posted 2005-01-20 05:44 PM


wow...I think I walked into this maze of thoughts and words.....now I am not sure which path will take me out of here....


Robert

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