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Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2005-01-20 03:27 AM

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-01-20 08:05 AM

your song...has been deleted

(thinking on that...for personal reasons)

I should try one of these...
*smiling*
M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-20 08:29 AM

whew....wonderfully penned

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-01-20 08:31 AM

snow..you know how i feel
about your way of speaking
enjoyed this one

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2005-01-20 12:28 PM

OUCH!

Enjoyed.

JL

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

5 posted 2005-01-20 04:20 PM

thud......
i felt it land and sink
real good

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2005-01-21 01:26 AM

You write with a wonderful slant and a unique angle,
and your poetry always draws me in, Snow.

I especially liked the mention of razor tipped wings,
that are to be reckoned with, no doubt.

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

7 posted 2005-01-21 02:17 AM

i had to say goodbye to a very good friend a year ago...it's taken me until now, to come to terms with it and to let go of something we shared... lastnight, i did that when i wrote this.

thanks so much for the comments. that you each felt this in a different way, means a lot to my creative mind.

i appreciate your thoughts.

snow

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"
p.neruda

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

8 posted 2005-01-22 12:02 PM

This is great...but so sad too. I feel funny inside. Not funny ha ha! More like...of da@n...why did I not know this. Sorry snow!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

9 posted 2005-01-22 01:01 AM

Brilliant, Snow!

......jo

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2005-01-22 01:06 AM

your style is really awesome...
I've read this a few times now..
and think it's great

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2005-01-22 01:12 AM

Stop Short is right -- this rocks! I think I'm going to have bruises where it grabbed me by the neck.....

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2005-01-22 02:21 AM

a deeply personal write, gracefully and subtlely executed
thanks for sharing it

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2005-01-22 09:38 AM

you share so much of you here

thank you

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

14 posted 2005-01-22 03:55 PM

sorry to hear of your lost.
Memories never die but live on within us.

:-)

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

15 posted 2005-01-22 11:26 PM

Your poems always amaze me!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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