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Open Poetry #34

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-19 08:00 AM

you made for me
chous of love words
there by the yesterday
at the window of your woman

your apron was short
and tied dangerously
careless on purpose
with definite strings

but easy access to knotless
capture and nothing else under
except your vulnerability
when your eyes turn that color

and your thoughts intend
to be more than just intentions
and you want only to offer
the waiting sum of your offering

to saturate our insatiability

_____________

Dark

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2005-01-19 08:13 AM

I see a lady who has nothing but time, to give & receive love....

You are very lucky...

Hugs and Good morning

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2005-01-19 09:25 AM

chous of love words

~*~

Greek, meaning "a unit of liquid capacity"
liquid love words...

works for me!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-19 10:40 AM

hearts echo in soul whispers, walls deliquescing in tender cascade - you touch me D -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2005-01-19 11:21 AM

to saturate our insatiability

It is so nice when our insatiablilty becomes totally saturated.

Loved this big guy!

Catrina
Member

since 2004-11-10

Posts 132

5 posted 2005-01-20 09:22 AM

but easy access to knotless
capture and nothing else under
except your vulnerability
when your eyes turn that color

and your thoughts intend
to be more than just intentions

~~~

A beautiful color, this.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2005-01-20 09:27 AM

Thank you all for your reviews...you humble me with your eyes.

sunshine...the chou(s) here are cream fulled puffs..but I think the greeks had the right idea.

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