Open Poetry #34 |
dancing the veils away |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
you stepped into my whitewashed world with your sin skin spin and sensual strut stuff those bad boy biker boots dancing your “tempt say-tion” words before my shuttered eyes i wore seven veils draped for the demure but they could not hide what you said you saw and would i dance for you too? Letting them fall to reveal my heaven it was awkward at first but you played such lovely music that my body took to sway your way bare foot and bangled with gypsy song longing and tambourine dreams then i too saw the she that lurked in the shadows always having danced in private longing for some adoring eyes and willing hands to pry the veils away s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Susan, incredibly good, any guesses on who this is about? So much like his format...both the poem and him... Enjoyed the read, and so will he...amazing |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, blatant, aren't I? But if one writes their heart - sometimes they must be blatant and he is very dear to me - has helped me grow, stretch my words - Thanks my friend - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
does the wind dare to whisper love to a gypsy and could you be that gypsy that loves the wind your stir me dear satin cherish, D |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
D - the wind stirs the heart and moves the gypsy soul to dancing - thanks for the warm of your heart - MmmmmmmGroves - thanks for your kind reply Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
nice, very nice i'd like some of his magic too if you think he could handle a 3some |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh Inky one - you make me grin - I'm sure he could handle an entire harem as if we do not all swoon as it is Vandana - thanks dear for leaving your smile Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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