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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Silk permutations slither and billow and sheen falling from my hips Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Very sensual, Nan... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
...and pretty...I liked |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
 ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Really nice one. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Quite pretty! I like it, too...  Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
reminds me of Maya nice senryu |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks guys, from your replies it looks like this one succeeded. Senryus are not easy for me. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A sensual beauty. *S* |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
love the feel of slipping silk  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Thanks Suthern girl, and Midnite Sun--there's nothing better than silk to make your skin feel all mmmmm , is there? Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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