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0 posted 2005-01-18 11:55 AM



Silk permutations
slither and billow and sheen
falling from my hips

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1 posted 2005-01-18 02:49 PM



Very sensual, Nan...

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2 posted 2005-01-18 02:50 PM


...and pretty...I liked
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3 posted 2005-01-18 11:33 PM




~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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4 posted 2005-01-19 01:12 AM


Really nice one.  
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5 posted 2005-01-19 03:26 AM


Quite pretty!
I like it, too...


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6 posted 2005-01-19 05:25 AM


reminds me of Maya

nice senryu

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7 posted 2005-01-19 10:57 AM


Thanks guys, from your replies it looks like this one succeeded. Senryus are not easy for me.

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8 posted 2005-01-24 12:56 PM


A sensual beauty. *S*
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9 posted 2005-01-24 12:58 PM


love the feel of slipping silk
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10 posted 2005-01-24 01:28 PM


Thanks Suthern girl, and Midnite Sun--there's nothing better than silk to make your skin feel all mmmmm , is there?

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