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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2005-01-18 09:28 AM


Distant light i see you,
shining across the lake.
Your eyes like moonbeams,
alert me to your presence.

Moonlight ripples lines,
the forest grey/white with
growing flecks of snow,
becoming indestinctly smeared.

Running excitedly to greet you,
my heart hotly pounds with
longing lonliness, to feel you near.
Solitary i have travelled to this moment.

Now here you are at last,
to see your warm breath in
the cold winter air moves me
to cry out, we howl our hearts return.

© Copyright 2005 P.D - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-01-18 09:44 AM


I liked this....a lot
MGROVES
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2 posted 2005-01-18 04:29 PM


yes i ejoyed this one too


vandana
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3 posted 2005-01-18 04:51 PM


good write
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2005-01-18 10:50 PM


If only the words would come to life, from off these pages of blue...and if only they were put together with action....

What a dream come true...what a scene to be remembered and shared~

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


Susan
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5 posted 2005-01-18 10:59 PM


Very nice -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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6 posted 2005-01-18 11:29 PM


Enjoyed!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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