Open Poetry #34 |
untitled (rp/wranx's mask challenge) |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I still smell you Weighed upon me in a hungered gravity leaving me in want of words and of you Try as I might I cannot pull you from the gloss and into arms your pictures are anchors sinking me into the depths of perfect eyes that reflect the sea that lies between us |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I KNOW who this is, but will stay quiet for a while. A perfect write of this poet's style and words. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I'm not sure Raph, honestly...but I believe I might see a bit of our Snow in this? Well done and challenge met! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now I am guessing the ever popular Dark Angel there, but if I am wrong I enjoyed whomever it is |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
I definitely see Snow in this... whoever it is, you've certainly complimented them. Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
OK, so isn't it who I think, Raphie? she is smart, pretty, and lives across the English channel. LOL. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
is it gem ? [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (10-26-2004 08:08 PM).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It is a poet of grace, and style... and I will stay quiet. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You got it! As for which one of you that's addressed to, I ain't sayin..yet |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Dude? I see Maree all over this. It reads like her "lighthouse series" Thanks for playing! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Oh come on... that just isn't fair! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
actually two of you are right, although each guess has garnered two responses each..shrugs No pouting Alyssa lol |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Raphie's asking for a spanking |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
again...I haven't been on this board long enough to distinguish individual styles...but this is ome sweet poetry, A~ love&light, **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
AHA! Yes, I was off the mark. 'Tis the one across the other seas, the one that strikes like lightning...Dark Angel. Well??? |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Don't even! *mumbles* thinkyoucanstopmefrompouting.illpoutgoodandwellwheneveriwantto,yeahyouhearthat,illpoutifiwanna. Now, tell! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Oi! Tis indeed the lass from down under. you can stop pouting now Alyssa lol, and Kacy, spankin's can be fun grins Thanks for the read/replies and thanks ed for adding a spark to the boards |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey Bells.....thanks for the honour m'friend, a second time around WOW! love ya. and like Ed said, like my lighthouse series. Mxx and I am haunted by my illicit exquisite dream but I can't really wake up so I just drift in between ~ani difranco~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Really well done, Raph! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*APPLAUSE* nice repost Raphy, and this time without the tantrum |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Well...guess I didn't make it here quick enough... geez.. Nice job Raph!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Okay, I'll take a stab ('tis the season!) at who it might be ~ el capitan? Whomever it be, I am most certain they will be flattered by your fine attempt at emulating them! Sending you a halloween hug, EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This is perfect Raph, my guess was Maree right off the bat. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You're all too kind, this one tanked the first time around thus Dawn's smartarse comments. Thanks for the read, Dawn..pbllllllllt |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
yeah, im bringing back up....a blatant BUMP ..suffer Raphy... cause this is just so awesome |
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