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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-01-17 06:16 PM


              Bridge


Words scream in words to be heard in words that scream of meaning understanding of

A Red or black look or a thought flying into thoughts that might fly into thoughts

On a light or dark backlit idea of a thought that echoed in a sun that promised you

Life is there on the streets of exercise together ness communication

Can people up and then tell everyone they have sanitation and food whilst they desire life

Build mountains of blocks that pay everyone money but those who live from the Government

Live from the people but remember

People are the country
And their sacrifices
Build a country

But don’t sacrifice more than you paid to do
Because
When you move into the world

You need to start at the beginning

Of these words


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1 posted 2005-01-17 07:13 PM


very well said sir heard this one loud and clear  could not have been written any better   it definatly has me


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2 posted 2005-01-17 08:50 PM


Thanks Marsha

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