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Open Poetry #34

The Girl and Her Ghost

Suede
Junior Member

since 2003-08-25

Posts 38
Drifting on the soul

0 posted 2005-01-17 01:40 PM

Dreams kept carefully
By watching eyes
The girl and her ghost
Walk hand in hand
Side by side
Beyond the waters weep
Beneath starlit skies
Amongst flowery fields
A towering hill
Were innocence feels
It doesn't have to hide
The girl and her ghost
With time out their mind's
Pass lives by with hope
And climb heaven's rope
Golden treasures they'll find
Kept carefully like dreams
Life's not all it seems
When the girl and her ghost
Paint the most perfect scenes

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2005-01-17 08:13 PM

interesting imagery here, enjoyed the shadowy echo feel of this ghost and girl strolling together

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2005-01-17 09:14 PM

ah, wandering with spirit in tow - i like the thought of that -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-17 09:51 PM

cool piece

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