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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-10-20 08:02 AM

Validity

I search the shadows of my mind
To reach and touch serenity
Yet know that I am senses blind
To reach the true reality

The shadows greet me every night
And play upon my interject
They stay behind my every light
And dance upon my introspect

It is a weary game I play
And time has slowed the shadows dance
The way has turned from pink to gray
And languid is the walk of chance

The candles that I burn each year
Turned from red to yellow pale
They sputter in the wind of fear
I see no shadows pail of bale

I may lose my way of see
But shadows there will ever be

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-10-20 08:15 AM

Morning Sir..

I search the shadows of my mind
To reach and touch serenity
Yet know that I am senses blind
To reach the true reality

aren't we all?

enjoyed the read..and it is good to see you back.. I was truly sorry to hear about your loss.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-10-20 08:28 AM

For you, Sy, I would make the shadows
warm and comfortable, that you would
always know you can find your way...
and that if you needed an extra bit of
light, that we would all be there for you...

as always.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-10-20 08:54 AM

"The candles that I burn each year
Turned from red to yellow pale
They sputter in the wind of fear
I see no shadows pail of bale

I may lose my way of see
But shadows there will ever be"

I won't ever let you lose your way Sy.

~Morning hugs and a hot cup of tea, Nancy~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

4 posted 2004-10-20 10:44 AM

enjoyed the write
bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-10-20 01:00 PM

The shadows soft in your fine mind
Are languid thoughts of passing time
But candles pink lit every year
Make each passing day far more dear.

EA

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2004-10-20 02:52 PM

None of us will let you lose your way Sy. We're here for you.

believe in what your heart feels...

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2004-10-20 03:02 PM

Heck I get lost between the bed and the shower each morning without my roadmap coffee so I figure you are doing pretty good. Always enjoy and this one gives validity to why you are held in such high asteem.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2004-10-20 03:03 PM

Sy...as always...

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2004-10-20 07:09 PM

Blindness exists only for those who have
no one, are alone...For you sir, this
shall never be.

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

10 posted 2010-09-30 12:57 PM

The opening stanza leaves a strong impression.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

11 posted 2010-09-30 09:28 PM

Earl,

Thank you for recognizing the magic of Sy.

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