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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Forever is never to come we are cropped from photo images placed and displaced into future moments after the now evaporates bubbles out from an era's effervescence fleeting, a faint memory trace the moment I get ridicluous notions garbled or expressed intelligently to say something lasts for all time! that I am of already wrinkled flesh sinuous thoughts lost in the vapours of space forever is never there is naught to be permanent on this asteroid's horizon I'll become only a faint recollection a product of social construct aside the plentiful inventions shameless decoys displayed but I was never here that I grew and lived at one address that civic number morphed into another that I packed and unpacked my belongings leaving dribs and drabs along the way as though to say it will all last but photos curl and yellow digital images will find their finite ends forever is never there is no light without dimness and never always lurks in the shadows. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-16-2005 12:53 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, dang... I so want to write "Kilroy was Here!" Excellent job, Sir! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
one thing's sure, never worry about the rhyme..although forced meter is one of the silliest things to write, it is I think part of the learning process... just play with words; if common sense rules than you can't veer too far from losing sense. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I love it Martin. Says many things or least to me it does. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this...  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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