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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2005-01-14 12:23 PM


I had it figured out in my life,
You asked me if you could be my wife.
Now I'm sitting here...lost.
So I sit here and I feel..Unreal,
My heart and self unable to heal.
Now I'm lost.
I thought I was finally found,
Into eternity with you I was bound.
But now...I'm lost.
And now I'm so far away,
Wishing I could make myself stay.
But I'm too far lost....

does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN

© Copyright 2005 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2005-01-14 01:36 PM



Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2005-01-14 09:58 PM


This hurts.

But healing always comes.

Well rendered!

Love, Margherita

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2005-01-14 10:20 PM


Kyle?

C'mere...

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Nightshade
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since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962
just out of reach
4 posted 2005-01-14 11:54 PM


Don't give up just yet my friend.
Your heart is stronger than you know.
hugs, Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
5 posted 2005-01-15 12:36 PM




  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
6 posted 2005-01-15 12:45 PM


Whatever those circumstances, love will find you again.  Hang in there.   .....jo
MGROVES
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california
7 posted 2005-01-15 06:13 AM


  understand and know the feeling
  you express yourself quite well

            


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