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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2005-01-14 09:13 AM


Upon awakening this morning
did hues of purple and pink
dance your mind,
and did you take it
as a sign
of what the day
could hold in store,
or did you wish
that you could see more?

Colors of rainbows
turned to black;
did you peel the shades
and turn them back,
to the images
you hold inside
where pale of thoughts
do reside,

and did you hear
a whisper of sigh
when candy visions   drifted
from the sky?

{with a nod and wink and thank you for
the inspire}


The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

© Copyright 2005 dmsmith - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2005-01-14 09:15 AM


Wonderful wonderful write dear Donna!
AND I LOVE the new pic!!!!
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

passing shadows
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2 posted 2005-01-14 09:17 AM


glad you got inspired

and yeah...love the new pic of you...you're a cutie

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2005-01-14 09:24 AM


the volumt of clouds
and sky
when the morning presses them
to the voyeur's window

enjoyed this view ms


inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-01-14 09:28 AM


love the candy visions
and those that inspire them for you

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2005-01-14 09:28 AM



I'm so glad you were inspired...
and that's a wonderful new photo!

LeeJ
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6 posted 2005-01-14 09:34 AM


I was shaking my head yes, at each line and question you were asking, although...ahh hem, knowing full well this wasn't written for me...tee heee...was it????  HEHEHEHEHE

Just kidding...love men, always will....

Love the new picture pretty lady and also thank you for a lovely read.

JL
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7 posted 2005-01-14 03:29 PM


Captivating write!
Enjoyed

JL


*Alli4000*
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8 posted 2005-01-14 07:53 PM


I love the new pic!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Lighthousebob
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9 posted 2005-01-14 08:11 PM


Candy from Heaven!!! Beautiful. -Bob
Susan
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walking the surreal
10 posted 2005-01-16 12:00 PM


Oh, somehow I missed this - glad I found it -lovely - and a great Sunday morning read-

Hugs - Susan  

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2005-01-16 03:28 PM


"Colors of rainbows
turned to black"

oh that one sentence is so powerful!!

Very well done Donna!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Magnus
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12 posted 2005-01-16 04:30 PM


A nicely inspired inspiration of a sweet
write.  Well done Donna, and yes, the new
pic (weeks old, at least)...compliments your
poetry well.

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