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The Blue of My Soul
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The Blue of My Soul |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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I’m eating wonder bread If only for a moment which can feed a lifetime In high altitude orbits Drifting like, the only force that matters Fibers of pink cover our faces With a quality of life Winking as we listen to afternoon Finding ourselves in imagined conversation Twilight typing memoirs Roses in full bloom Wearing white summer cloths Tip toeing over anorexic mists Hunching forward Wanting more In the world for you There, look, the hills waiting Calling your name in lights I smiled, while you whizzed by For a moment, forgetting where I was going But loving where you reached Loving watching you… Which is what I’d rather do Then climb into your boat Like they say “Every word considers, the next to come” Oh, darling, if you only knew How I love passing by our ancestral portraits Every night when I think of you… Pausing for a moment Knowing the happy dining room You now live in Yes, I pace sometimes till dawn But, you’ll never know, I’ll never let you… You see, those polite lil emissaries Keep sighs which breath softly… We were never meant to be Your happiness glows me…. And I promise, yours before mine And I love you for it….your success The flesh and beauty around your eyes Holding close the precious flowers you gave me The soft darkness and music of the night A duet which glances behind Yes, your power over me, sings inside me Wishing you were here again…. God lives in all the invisible lines…doesn’t He? Inspired by the Phantom of the Opera |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sometime when I am talking to god I catch him yawning I asked the other day how could you make me boring he said I was sick that day enjoyed you here leeJ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A duet which glances behind Yes, your power over me, sings inside me Fantastic lines, dear Lee. I will have to see this movie as you have been so deeply inspired. Love, Margherita  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this aches me, but also makes me smile |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
saw it on broadway walked out; husband couldnt take the singing anyhow, i'd never walk out on one of your poems, too much for the senses to indulge in |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow-Wow-Wow! You are too good! Beautiful write. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
always in awe with your words thanks |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ Enjoyed your phantom, you articulate well. Good morning sweet. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Amazing. Eric |
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