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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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If you hold back on what to write your word usage isn't just right don't expect the phrases to flow don't expect your efforts to show... You hold back on the creative time to wait for an appropriate rhyme?! The this and that don't breathe stifled on their own words forcefully stuck together to rhyme, just to create a melody! what of the jumble minus the parody... An original purpose you had was missed you withheld on what you wanted to say I left out rhyme that was standard then inspired by Ginsberg advise on how to pen.. [This message has been edited by ecrivan (01-14-2005 12:15 AM).] |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hello Martin, I really like this.I have held off on certain words only to lose them before penning them. :-) Ps. going to print this and put above my desk. Within this heart you'll find love |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very candid, indeed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
good advice  |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
There's nothing to lose about writing on the method once in a while amid so much stuff the strokes the ego....and that's good too once in a while... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I know this is good advice....thanks.  ...jo |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
Wisdom shared with humor, this was GREAT!  Thanks! |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
It something I have to live up to as well! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm smiling and thinking how much this could be applicable to life...wonderful penning as always |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I agree. The flow of thoughts and the music can reach peaks of beauty without rhyme. But this time you combined both successfully, because it's good to memorize... Love, Margherita |
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