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Sigh of the Wind
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Sigh of the Wind |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Sigh of the Wind It passes me but does not stay The wind that passes every day Each one a whirlwind of a sigh That rises up the dust of die It spreads across the land like bees Collecting nectar making keys Making change within the change That seems to me so very strange An enzyme in this world of grime Building on the bones of time Seeking for a mortars glue To put into this cooking stew Tasting of the simmering pot Adding spices of begot Twisting, learning, yearning more Driving to the very core And in the core would be the prime The essence of the birth of time |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and yanno?  I think, that you and I together, could add a bit 'o salt. grin  love ya sy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Twisting, learning, yearning more Driving to the very core And in the core would be the prime The essence of the birth of time Your vision travels far and deep, dear Seymour. This has power! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this is amazing... talk about Frequency...just finished a note to a friend about the wind... Are you a seer? smiles and hugs Morning Mr. Word Machine Thanks for the images and structure |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
May the wind fill your sail with imagination Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sometimes the wind does sigh.. and other times a mighty roar. This is an excellent piece of writting Sy! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sy, I think I'm smiling just as much at you, as I am at the ladies who have left their own personal touches upon the wind... Well done, m'friend... I could say nothing better than what has already been blown away...   |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
It spreads across the land like bees Collecting nectar making keys Making change within the change That seems to me so very strange This is brilliant! hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, I'll bet we could,  Margherita Thank you sweet, hugs back. LeeJ Top of the morning to you doll. And thanks for the read and comment. scorpio I think it's doing pretty good now. LOL Nancy Thank you dear and morning hugs back. Sunshine Love you too. Chris You are just a sweetheart, Hugs back. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It passes me but does not stay The wind that passes every day Each one a whirlwind of a sigh That rises up the dust of die It spreads across the land like bees Collecting nectar making keys Making change within the change That seems to me so very strange ==================================== more like SY of the Wind... When you tap rhymes from these keys ... wisdom's wind is heard upon your breeze.  *ww*  Among the kingdom of the winds ... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Sy's sigh of the wind. Tell Randy to give you a kiss for me. Winkiewinkie |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Seymour, I love the soft sigh of the wind... a soft, gentle breeze....... it's the ones that come with the hurricanes and tornadoes that I don't like. I love your poem, too. Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, You are like a gentle breeze. |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
I see a vision of a wave of wind first gentle ripples but gathering strength and tumbling over each other as they move forward...What a wonderful vision of wonder you presented me with your words...thank you... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Gee Sy, A mighty wind did I feel, Ducking it, I had to kneel, In its whistle, wisdom cold, Stung by your Thursday words so bold! I will put away those petty things, Releasing pain, cold or hot brings. Yes, winds of time are shivering cold, But warm is your wisdom as I grow old! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Startime55 Always a pleasure to read your comments. Sharon, Thank you dear and to me you will never grow old. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write Sy!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Alli. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
My senses are stirring now, just as if the wind brushed across my cheek! Sigh......jo |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you iliana. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
mmmmmmm...ahhhhhhhh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
loved it seymour Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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