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Passion (For Wranx's Masquerade Challenge)
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Passion (For Wranx's Masquerade Challenge) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Passion Passion plays upon my brain The strum of real but not the same My chords are but a finger’s play Upon the visions of the day In phantom guise I mask the me And pluck the stay of ecstasy I ride the wile of the before And chide the come of never more Euphoric tunes of pleasure’s seem Are phonic threads of phobic dream That rest upon the fringe of taunt By night they strum, by day they haunt But I would never snuff the song Of lover’s dreams where I belong [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (10-26-2004 07:16 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and you do this so beautifully... smile here: "Euphoric tunes of pleasure’s seem Are phonic threads of phobic dream" You could put that on my tombstone--if I had want of one.  gracefully stunning as always |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Good Passionate morning to you, my dear friend - You're on top of your song for sure...  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you play a mean guitar lady jane....smiles and hugs Euphoric tunes of pleasure’s seem Are phonic threads of phobic dream That rest upon the fringe of taunt By night they strum, by day they haunt But I would never snuff the song Of lover’s dreams where I belong simply stunning, as is your talent... beautifully done |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, if this were to be part of Wranx' challenge, I would say you could see Sy all over this... but as it doesn't appear to be part of the challenge, well then, most assuredly, it is one of your best ever, Lady Santos...  |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, Lady Sunshine! It was, in fact part of Wranx' challenge, masquaraded for sure, but uncovered by a poetic pro. (You'll notice that it's not even signed.I appologixe to Sy for even trying to imitate his writing. I simple couldn't come close. But at least one person thought I imitated his style. So it wasn't in vane. THose brilliant comments make me want to keep writing like Sy. LOL. Anyway, Thank you Sy for letting me borrow your brilliance. And Kudos to you,Lady Sunshine for uncovering my game. It was fun! Liz |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Thank you ma'am for a double dose of the Sighmeister today, you did him proud.  These two lines were sure Sy's signature Liz:I ride the wile of the before And chide the come of never more |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I would have guessed it to be our beloved Sey even before I read all the comments. well done Liz! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Liz, don't fret. I said Sy after about two lines, that is how well you wrote it. Splendidly, for sure. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hmmm could it be Nan? it's beautiful Elizabeth  M and I am haunted |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a great *sigh* ! A beautiful write, in its own right. This masquerade challenge has really brought out some mighty fine poetry. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
ah yes a sy for sure, well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderfully penned Liz.. and this had Sy written all over it! Hugs~Nancy ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
  I love it when I win!  |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Nice costume! You've worn it well! Thanks for playing with us! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
looks like Sy to me.. and looks like him, well done.. bravo ma;am.. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Little late I am...but as soon as I started reading I saw Sy... You did good!!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good Lord, this is lovely Elizabeth! |
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